Today Mary asked me to read Egg Drop by Mini Grey. Here is the first part.
Your writing task today is to write a short story imagining you could fly. Here is your title and first sentence:
The Day I Could Fly
Once upon a time, I grew wings.
Use the picture under the video to inspire you!
Write your story in the comment box below or email me l.barr@stvincnt.bham.sch.uk
Your story might be posted on the blog tomorrow.
The Day I Could Fly.
Once upon a time, I woke up with wings. I had big, rainbow coloured and fluffy wings. With my wings, I wished that I could fly around the world in 24 hours. I flapped my wings really fast and start to fly, after flying for 12 hours I got tired and then rest on top of a mountain. I start to fly again and then I flew all around the world and I saw so many beautiful things.
Njogu, that is a lovely story. What beautiful things did you see on your journey?
I wish I could fly. I would fly around to see all of the children at home beause we are missing them so much xx
Me too!
hi it was a good story thank you miss barr
You’re welcome Abubakr. The next part will be on later today.
Hi abubakr I have you an iron man Armor I hope you like it.
Abu dude why did you not say thank for the iron man armor.
once upon a time I grew wings and I fly around looking for people doing naughty things,I see a bank robber so I fly down pick him up and take him to a police officer to take him to prison
I’m glad you would use your superpower of flying to save people! Well done Thomas. I can see you are trying to use full stops in your writing. It is more tricky when typing. The . button is next to the , button.