Hello Year 4!

Welcome Year 4,

This is your first writing task. Copy and paste this extract but make sure you include all of the missing punctuation marks which I (Miss Khan) has missed. Put the correctly punctuated paragraph in the comment box below. 

 

mr and mrs bucket and little Charlie bucket slept in another room upon mattresses on the floor in the summer time this wasnt too bad but in the winter freezing cold draughts blew across the floor all night long and it was awful there wasnt any question of them being able to buy a better house

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  1. Mr and Mrs Bucket and little Charlie Bucket slept in another room upon a mattress on the floor. In the summer time this wasn’t to bad but in the winter freezing cold draughts blew across the floor all night long. It was awful,there wasn’t any question of them being able to buy a better house.

  2. Mr and Mrs bucket and little Charlie bucket slept in another room upon mattresses on the floor in the summer time this wasn’t too bad but in the winter freezing cold draughts blew across the floor all night long and it was awful there wasn’t any question of them being able to buy a better house.

  3. Mr and Mrs bucket and little Charlie bucket slept in another room upon mattresses on the floor. In the summer time this wasn’t too bad but in the winter freezing cold. Draught blew across the floor all night long and it was awful, there
    wasn’t any question of them being able to buy a better house.

  4. Mr and Mrs Bucket and little Charlie Bucket slept in another room upon mattresses on the floor . In the summer time this wasn`t too bad but in the winter freezing cold. Draughts blew across the floor all night long and it was awful there wasn`t any question of them being able to buy a better house.

  5. Mr and Mrs Bucket and little Charlie Bucket slept in another room upon mattresses on the floor. In the summer time this wasnt too bad,but in the winter freezing,cold draughts blew across the floor all night long and it was awful.There wasnt any question of them being able to buy a better home.

  6. Mr and Mrs Bucket and little Charlie Bucket slept in another room upon Mattresses on floor. In the summer time this wasn’t too Bad but in the winter freezing cold draughts Blew across the floor all night long and it was awful there wasn’t any question of them Being able to buy a Better house.

  7. Mr and Mrs Bucket and little Charlie Bucket slept in another room upon mattresses on the floor in the Summer time wasn’t too bad in the Winter freezing cold draughts blew across the floor all might long and it was awful there wasn’t any question of them being able to buy a better house.

  8. Mr and Mrs Bucket and little Charlie Bucket slept in another room upon mattresses on the floor in the Summer time this wasn’t too bad in the Winter freezing cold draughts blew across the floor all might long and it was awful there wasn’t any question of them being able to buy a better house.

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